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Having Hope

Do not look back in sadness nor dispair,
keep on smiling when life seems unfair.
Takes many steps to the mountain top,
don't ever give up or give pause to stop.

In our lives a little rain must fall they say,
before sunny skies come rolling our way.
There are some times we all play the fool,
we make mistakes, ignor the golden rule.

To reach life's goals we must all strive,
happiness awaits to make us feel alive.
Life as does the river has many bends
continuely flows until our journey's end.

We all get impatient for things to change,
as we sort out our lives and rearrange.
We all search for the end of the rainbow,
weathering storms the cold wind blows.

Have hope no matter what life may spew,
keep faith and life will get better for you.
Sometimes best things are saved for last,
comes to us when the storms have passed.


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Quote: "The greatest song has yet to be written, the greatest singer has yet to sing, the greatest razor has yet to be invented, and the greatest champion can always be beaten. Thank God the best is yet to come." By: Shiro Matsuo

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  • Clovis6790Curious silver member
    January 26, 2009

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    Excellent

    As usual, a very fine write. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

  • Judith Chandler
    January 25, 2009

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    Hope is always there so I can certainly relate to the mixed happiness and sadness and to the spewing up by life.

    Nice flow and rhymes. Keep on hoping.

    Congrats on your bronze trophy.


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 26, 2009
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      Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate you stopping by. Take care, Sandy


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    January 17, 2009

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    Beautifully inspirational and well said!
    Thanks so much for this entry and all
    the best to you with it in my contest!
    I appreciate it!




    Jeremy0826


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 19, 2009
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      Thank you for this lovely comment. I do appreciate you stopping by and reading. Take care, Have a great day. Sandy


  • islekine
    January 16, 2009

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    Wonderful inspirational words!

    Lovely entry! Best wishes in the contest and always.
    There are sometimes we all play the fool,
    in this line...you want some times....
    Write on!


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 19, 2009
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      Thank you for this lovely comment. I do apreciate you stopping by and reading. Take care, Have a great day. Sandy

  • Papagallo
    January 15, 2009

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    Your poems are always so true. We always have to look to tomorrow, for tomorrow will always be better. We never get more than we can handle. Most people cannot seem to wait, but we have to. Put it all to faith. Hard to do, but it works. Thanks for such a beautiful verse.


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 19, 2009
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      Good Morning Papagallo, Thank you for this lovely comment. I do appreciate you stopping by and reading. Take care, Have a great day. Sandy

  • mcheadle
    January 15, 2009

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    This brought me to tears and still

    Gave me hope for tomorrow. I think I have been hunting for these words for a lon, long. long time.
    Thank-you so kindly- withtears in my eyes . . . m a c


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 19, 2009
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      Good morning Mac, Thank you for this lovely comment. I do appreciate you stopping by and reading. Take care, Have a great day. Sandy

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