below zero
city held "frostage"
Chicago
A contest entry
- Winter-ku by azure85.
900 points, ended January 30, 46 entries
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clever
Hi there. This is a clever haiku/senryu and it gave me a nice, wry smile. I enjoyed the word play in it.
You haven't been around much recently; i hope everything is
going well for you.
Cheers,
myron.
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I like that word 'frostage.'
It must be bloody cold and here it is 118 degrees on my porch.
Great poem.
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Thank you--wish I could send some cold there to even the temperatures out!
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below zero
city held "frostage"
Chicago
Oh, this is cute! Very appropriate for that city during the winter, thank you for a cool haiku!
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Thank you for the comment--both your haiku and your contests favorites!
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This is a clever little form poem.
Its rediculously cold over there
Be blessed in all you ever do.
Tony
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Thank you so much--back to GreenRipple--I have been away from site too long!
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