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Oh Sheepy I do love Thee

I was a giant
stuck among men that flocked
like sheep.

And as always
there was a black one
hell-bent on destruction.

He shocked me into silence.

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http://peterellis.deviantart.com/art/Shocking-Flocking-Birds-83600909

Another challenge from kiwigirljacks.

The requirements were; no rhyme, less than 50 words.

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  • StarEyes
    January 15, 2009

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    Sweet Pea,

    How true your words! You show that clearly in this one! You did a great job on this!

    Ek is lief vir jou altyd

    Mom


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 15, 2009

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    Lovin that title!

    Ahh yes, this shows an understanding beyond your years of men! lol

    I think this is a fabulous write for the picture! Damn, I should have used it for a quickie and then you could have entered this!


  • Cannonsfire
    January 15, 2009

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    I like it although because of you both being in NZ what is it with sheep