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                                      Sitting by the fire

                                      I wait for you.

                                    I miss your strong arms wrapped
                                    around me along with your sweet
                                    kisses

                                    Looking at the fire, I think of
                                    our good times like roasting marshmallows
                                  for our smores.
                               
                                  How I miss those days.
                                  Come home sweetheart I miss you and need you.
                               

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  • good work

    i can relate to this very much and has made me a little sad after indulging in reminisce.
    thanks for sharing

  • cookie84
    February 5
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    love it

    It reminds me of the day i spent with an ex of mine


  • HaileeDear
    January 15
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    This makes me sad. I know how it is to loose someone you really care about. And usually, they dont even know that those little things they do, likekissing your forehead or gently rubbing your hand, makes you feel so special.

    great work darling, wonderful emotion.


    • Nikki22
      January 17
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      Hey thanks for the comments you two. I appreciate it a lot.


  • Dragonbabyx3
    January 15
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    Awwwww This is so sweet, and terrible at the same time. (It's making me miss someone too! which is why I say it's terrible!) But that is a good thing because that means it is emotional! The second sentence I dont think needs a period, other than that, I think its wonderful! Great Job!

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