I find it hard to see,
That far ahead.
The only thing that brings negativity is what's in our head.
Perhaps it shall be the same,
Only without such an intrusively unhappy brain.
If I could re-live my life without those pondering thoughts,
I'd be so happy,
Lots and lots.
I shall fail school and still be joyous,
I shall be ageless,
It won't matter me.
I shall say "hey" to everyone,
I shall jump out of planes,
It won't affect my non-existent badly-behaved brain.
Author notes
Well what can I say? I tried to put exactly how I feel about this current life into this poem in a creative way, if you can understand that then let me know, I'd love to know what everyone thinks.
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Anyone understand me?
Comments
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i understand. what you see in life is what brings negativity to your head. eventually your thoughts began to think negatively because of what your seeing. so if you could go back knowing that, you probably if possible keep your eyes closed. and only open them to prospects that will help and build you up. or did totally miss your point?
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wow a lovely poem and thnx for enetering
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