Her lips rape mine
Taking from me whatever I have to give her
And, I let her
I enjoyed the way her fingers
Trailed over my body
Tracing me as if I were
A map to some
Unknown treasure
I felt alive in her arms
God, how I loved her
My beautiful mess of a woman
In the morning, I knew she'd be gone
Taking with her my heart
Until another fucking guy
Stole hers and crushed it under
Steel toed boots
And then, she'd be back
I sighed in ecstasy as her lips found the
One spot that stole every last
Thought
away
She moaned and whispered "Baby, you taste like honey."
Author notes
Inspired by a free write.
I was picturing two women caught in the most intimate of acts with each other. The one, knowing the other will leave her once the sun is up. But, for a moment in time...she doesn't care. They feed off of each other and for a few hours, they both don't feel alone. 
Let me know what you think, please!
Comments
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Wow, this was uber intense, and totally amazing! I loved the little explanantion too. I don't know, I thik it was the fact that she'd leave her for a guy that really...got me you could say. Yay. Confetti. Bravo.
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I liked it too. Very well written. I thought you could end most effectively with steel toed boots.
Alternately - she'd be back would sound well.
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Very sensual... passionate painting a picture of longing, seeking connection hoping love shall blossom. Good Write
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