i was silenced the hard way.
with a push and a tug,
a strange feeling in my legs,
and a hand on my mouth.
he told me not to move,
not to straggle or sway,
a look in his eyes...
thats all i can say,
he gave me a startle,
by the look that he gave,
he said shut your eyes babe,
i didnt think,
my best friend herd,
the scream i put out,
because he didnt stop the pain,
and he didnt make a sound,
he chained me up,
and drank some more,
he yelled and said,
baby dont be scared,
i bleed and i hurt,
but he just didnt care,
now im scarred and im scared,
from his actions and hormones.
he left the room,
with a soft whisper of strength,
it said "god baby.. i love you"
but i couldnt speak when i tried to answer.
"..but why?"
A contest entry
- All of the Above by Flowergirl.
650 points, ended January 16, 10 entries
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Comments
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EMO!
little werid, but a good righting. -
SAD...!
The emotion is extremely strong in this piece. I feel very - very - depressed, but I must admit that you've done this piece really well!
You communicated the actions with very direct words.
And I'm going to 2nd what Itahed said --- I hope that this isn't from your own experience!!! (Either way, I will still give you a thousand hugs, all right?)
Great work, by the way.
~Meli
P/s: appreciate the applause smilies...
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the write is well written, but the meaning is very sad.
Ihope that this is NOT from your own experince. But Your talent shines through in your writings -
wow very nice i love the emotion in this work thanks for the entry.
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