Spiritual being
in human shell
awaiting my
next time
around.
If I could choose
my energy
would
become
the wind,
to blow
forever,
through the
cosmos.
A contest entry
- Quote Prompt, No Line or Word Limit... by mysticstorm.
600 points, ended January 24, 2009, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Soft with depth...I do believe the wind is a wonderful choice to BE forever after...well done.
Thank you for entering!
mystic
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Love the picture this paints - of a gentle wind, spirit of the air - just twirling through the universe!
best wishes in your contest
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Wow~
You know when You are ready to let me borrow Your brain- I am here
Love how You penned this and the reference to
Spiritual being
in human shell
Excellent~~ Woot!
Just Love that reference~
You took this to a whole new level
which You always do anyways
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Nicely stated ...
thoughts ... and you probably are already there and spreading the breeze simultaneously! jy
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OOOh wow! I dont even know what to say about this. in our shells waiting for the next life--(thats what I think you were getting at) and energy blowing through the cosmos, awesome stuff here! i can see that in my mind. well done. much love
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Yes, Indeed.. I'm with you there, let's go take on the cosmos together.. lol! I loved it!
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