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Fight!

You've got to fight for what you believe in
you've got to fight for what is right.
If you fight for your dignity
you gain a little height.

you must fight for your freedoms
you must fight for love and peace
if you fight for what is upright
your troubles should decrease.

We must fight against the anger
we must fight against the hate
we can live as one, yes! it can be done
of that there is no debate.

So fight with me against oppression
fight with me against the unjust,
come, lets fight- day and night
but fight! fight, we must.




Author notes

....................................................................................................................................................not really sure how i feel about this one, but it has been in my head for a day and a half and past experience told me to get it in writing...so here you have it...feel free to pick it apart or offer suggestions or to just read and move on(though some sort of comment-positive or negative-would be nice).

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  • galfalfa gold member
    January 15

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    I'm not sure how i feel about
    the word fight which to me brings to my mind, force or violence,
    i'd like it more if that word was
    not used but instead, we must work together or unite against

    galfalfa


    • Ogreatbaldone gold member
      January 17
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      I agree Gal, Fight is a strong word, but we fight wars, we fight diseases, we fight for what is right. I meant fight in a positive way not a negative one as I am sure you are aware, fight is ugly but sometimes( to the writer) it seems like the right word to use. Nice to hear from you Gal, hope all is well with you and yours.
      Peace
      Terry

      • galfalfa gold member
        January 18
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        ok, so in the words of the cowardly lion , i will leave you with this, Put'em up, Put'em up thanks
        Terry, hope all is well with you too


  • untouched pages
    January 15

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    Ok but you asked for it....*cracks nuckles
    well i think that you really have a doozie here... I mean the theme.... Is AMAZING. I believe that it is one of the most untalked about issue in our would today! I really like it!! There might be some tweeking here and there but its totaly your choice!!