& i want to give you something brilliant to
take away your breath, but all I have are broken
hearts and cheshire grins; drawn on with
magic markers.
i am a girl of obtuse angles and clichéd metaphor.
i am the moon sapping strength from the golden
sun. i am yesterday's roses wilted with the summer
heat.
& you are the queen of hearts,
breaking all the rules and drawing technicolour
sunsets on every petal.
Author notes
so you know those cliches that make you want to puke?
I'm pretty sure I used a few...but I can't get that damn Alice out of my head.
Yay for one year? :L
A contest entry
- it's been a year. by aanika.
6011 points, ended January 30, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It's Magical ^_^
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I like this
Cliche or no, there's a touch of whimsy to this poem that draws the reader in
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