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Snapshot (or Why You Shouldn't Give Emily Ideas)

delicate fingers pick at plastic seal with infinite grace.
she examines the delicacy for a moment before tasting it,
eyes closed to savour this one constant;
a pudding cup is never just a pudding cup.

Author notes

Told you, sis. -grins-
Next up is Sarah tripping up the stairs with all the grace of... something... very... graceful...
(Contest notes: Soo it was a choice between depressing you with something that DOES rhyme and not-depressing you with something that doesn't, and I chose this one. Sorry I didn't have both.)

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  • ItaloEtkin
    April 7
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    adorable!


  • Confusedboy
    January 28

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    Ahhhhh how sweet. Thank you for the memories, as i would taste the frosting on the cakes mother baked. I would do it close to the platter, so she would not notice my little finger. Yummy tasted wonderful. She always caught me. lol.


  • AbidoodleCullen
    January 25
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    Thanks for entering and good luck!
    <3 Abi


  • ChelseySmile
    January 20
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    Such a simple thing turned into poetry.
    Lovely.


  • broken-colours
    January 14

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    xD
    WOW.
    That was very. Wow.
    *giggles very much*
    You brightened my day with that.
    It was enormously silly.
    And sweet, in a weird way.

    Love you sis.
    :]

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