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Spring Boxes

Two little boxes side by side,
lids sealed shut, what do they hide?
One shudders, shudders, tilt.
Surrounding flowers, they wilt.
The other bounces, flounces, see
the lid is open, butterfly to flee.
The one box flutters, off with the lid
from it springs a toad, pa-pad-pid.
Two little boxes sitting side by side,
no different, but for what they hide.

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hold your head high and be proud of who you are. Live every day with love and respect. Make the best out of what you have. find out about the boy who uses ecolocation, like a bat or dolphin, instead of sight.

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  • MissSami
    January 15
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    Good rhythm =]


  • faded dreams
    January 15

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    Very cute a whimsical. I enjoyed this quite a bit. Please read through the rules again as you seem to have forgotten one. Thanks