You are sin incarnate,
in times of old, you wanted equality,
in times of old, you wanted respect,
but be wary,
Lilith, of your vengeful ways,
before your fall,
and the beginning of days,
you were cast away,
but make no mistake,
you are a snake-tongued liar,
many think it was you in serpent-form
who goaded Eve into eating the apple,
but you know the truth,
you just wanted revenge,
on a dissatisfying husband,
and an incompetent God,
'Twas the Devil himself what gave you a nod,
saying "Do it, Lilith, cause Adam's great Fall."
Author notes
... Well, I gave it my all. about lilith, adam's first wife.
A contest entry
- History Has a Way of Repeating Itself by Carpe Noctem.
875 points, ended January 17, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hope you enjoyed....
Comments
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You are a naughty monkey who writes double-entendre poetry that makes me think and grin like the Cheshire Cat all at the same time.
*loffs*


