Voices resonate
through her silken membranes,
splattering empty halls
in crimson velveteen;
Guttural cries cryptically scrawled
across silence's tapestry;
bloodshot eyes stapled shut,
torn open to reveal
our innate ugliness.
Author notes
Option 1:
http://dianar87.deviantart.com/art/Please-Stop-55041132
Background made by PastelMoons.
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A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie #2 by Sweet Impatience.
1500 points, ended January 15, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very nice
Thank you for your comment and your help.
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wow lor-lor this is amazing,
not your strongest, in imagery but still amazing,
I love you and I promise I'll catch up with your works,
xxx I love you xxx
Kitty xxx
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nice...i like it
but the background is giving me a headache
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you're very dark as of late, but this is wow, congrats on the shiney...
and the BG is a perfect fit of course, bravo.
Tasha
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Congrats on the shiny
so well deserved
as this is a very
emotionally affective
write!
I love your word choices
and the imagery is amazing
Thank you for sharing
~Pastel
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this poem blew me away. the imagery is incredibly dark and quite vivid. wow, just blew me right out of the water this am. I maybe reading this wrong or perhaps my interpretation is way off, but this has a lot of emotional pain seeping from each word.. Brilliant take on the prompt & with your poem
good luck
kat
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