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Sad

Missing image

withdrawing from world
she finds cornered,
make believe world
hard to find.

putting head on lap
weeps inconsolably,
until illusions washed,
vision finds insights,
illuminating inner self,

perception unlocking within.

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    January 15

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    you did a great job with the prompt. great poem

    good luck
    kat


  • maralisa silver member
    January 15
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    a wonderful take on the promt dad good luck in the image good luck n the contestmaralisa


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    January 14

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    THis is such a great write and goes so well with this picture. You have really let all the emotions come to the surface here. Well done and all teh best for the contest.