Fear relinquishes all deception;
for inside her mind
lies
escape
Fallacy remains,
as always will
an empty
callous
chasm
Evading ones anguished memories
compares nothing to
grasping at
invisible
enemies
Author notes
Option 4
http://dianar87.deviantart.com/art/Veiled-69539929
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie #2 by Sweet Impatience.
1500 points, ended January 15, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Another great write my friend.
The ending had a certain impact in it, what a way to end a short poem, loved it.
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this is an incredible poem, I love this one so much. the imagery is quite vivid & dark. My favorite part is the last stanza.. especially the last 3 lines. Incredible take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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Beautifully penned... I love the closing stanza... truth has a beauty all its own.
Ken
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