veiled
within winter,
gazes frost covered heart
upon horizon of springtime,
desire
with crimson leaves desiccated,
tossed beneath remembrance
of negligence
and sighs
waning moon
between the stars
one teardrop
Author notes
option 4
butterfly cinquain and haiku
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie #2 by Sweet Impatience.
1500 points, ended January 15, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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stunning
speechless!!!
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A beautiful and touching poem--love the contrast between frost and crimson leaves and the way you tied it together in the last line!
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this is an incredible poem that you've penned. I love the form poetry, I've yet to be able to write it myself that way.. You make it look so easy. the imagery is beautiful, excellent job.
good luck
kat
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I love the combination of forms... you've captured real beauty with your words...
Ken
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