Eyes as deep as oceans
Allow insight into a haunted soul.
The one who never sleeps
Knows all that goes on in the night.
Creeping thoughts,
Screaming memories,
Shifting to the front
Of her withered mind.
Nobody else recalls
The horrors viewed,
When everyone is asleep
In the middle of the night.
Author notes
Option A.
A contest entry
- Out of the picture. Prompt. by morgana raven.
400 points, ended January 15, 10 entries
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700 points, ended February 22, 39 entries
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800 points, ended May 3, 8 entries
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950 points, ended May 8, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Can't seem to find any negative comments as requested in my competition.
So this is about a person who has nightmares of an unspecified form.
wow -
In it's brevity, and with such lovely imagery, this piece is just excellent. The second stanza was my favorite, I'm adding you to the finalists. Thanks for entering this.
-Lena -
I like it! but I liked the other one better, so I will submit that one to litmag. a little vague and angsty, but still good!
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I really like the last stanza. Almost missed this one too many contests cant see whats going where haha, anyhow, thanks for entering.
Laura -
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Thanks!
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i really like this one =)
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