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Hell Within

 

 

 

 

 

 

Blood falls from the walls

demons scream angrily from within

clawing their way out of me

slashing and tearing me apart

I fall to the ground

praying for a miracle

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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30 Words
Prompt: http://dianar87.deviantart.com/art/Please-Stop-55041132
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  • XXStOlEn-HaLoXx
    January 15
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    dark n twisted just how i like it lol good write love...


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    January 15

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    this is an incredibly dark that you've written. not your usual, different is good.. you write dark well. demons ah yes, we all have em. you set these ones free, sometimes I wish it was that easy but alas its not always. Your words paint a dark picture all of their own.. life is best when the demons are no longer within us.. huh?

    fantastic take on the prompt & fantastic poem

    good luck
    kat


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    January 15

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    Oh hello. Did I miss something, dear friend?? This is not what I normally read from you. I hope all is well. It is a great poem, though.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • KayJay
    January 14

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    A wonderfully insightful write... you've freed the demons Well done.
    Ken


  • Canadamomma
    January 14

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    awesome take on the prompt, best of luck to you

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