When you wake today
Smile for she is with you
When you leave for work
Smile for she is with you
When the sun touches your face
Smile for she is with you
Each snowflake that falls on your cheek
Smile for she is with you
Every customer you deal with
Smile for she is with you
While you do your work
Smile for she is with you
For your ride home tonight
Smile for she is with you
When you lay your head down to sleep
Smile for she is with you
Author notes
For a dear friend on the anniversary of the loss of a loved one.
A contest entry
- Quote Prompt, No Line or Word Limit... by mysticstorm.
600 points, ended January 24, 2009, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Struggling to find my muse lately :(
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beautiful write
My wonderful, amazing, kind hearted friend, this write is truly awesome!!!! I'm so sorry it's taken me this long to respond! Your heart is beautiful, that's so clear in your writing! You are one of those "angels" everyone needs in their life! I'm so very honored to be your friend Love Always, Angel
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I am so glad you liked it
Your Nana was such a special person and I am proud to have known her.
Everyone needs an Angel and you are mine
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W onderful words of truth and comfort...very touching and deep...soft and welcoming.
Thank you for entering!
mystic
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Thank You
Thank you, I wrote this for my best friend
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This is really so beautiful, I loved reading through this. I am sure your friend must be so grateful to you for writing this. well done, its wonderful.
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Thank you
Thank you so much. I wanted to write something that would make her feel good because her Nana's soul is now apart of her.
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