My desire clings in
memory, tinting
my vision.
Diaphanous waves of
ardor curl about me,
increasing my need
for pleasure’s release.
You awake in me a
hunger...
that devours me.
Author notes
Option 4.
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://dianar87.deviantart.com/art/Veiled-69539929
30 words (exactly 
)
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie #2 by Sweet Impatience.
1500 points, ended January 15, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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This one has a lot of words I don understand
But form what I did gather, this is a smoking hot poem!
Congrats on the shiny
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BT well deserved! The last three lines were my favorites, but the entire write was fine.
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Isn't that a wonderful feel when the one you love
just wakes your senses with a touch so soft. A
sensual & romantic read. Lovely!
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this is a beautiful & very sensual poem. there is a softness about it, so very nice .. I love it a lot. I know this feeling so very well. the imagery is vivid & beautiful.
Brilliant take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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You always do have such a way with the erotic. Great piece Ken, it does perfect justice to the picture you've chosen.
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wonderfully sensual write, deliciously anguished.
best of luck
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