I'm leaving,
there wasn't a chance on staying,
there wasn't even a hope on dreaming.
You just lead me on,
with all your false promises and smiles.
Then you turned around for the past,
and left me alone for the future.
I loved you,
and you left me.
I loved you,
and you didn't love me...
Author notes
just something that came to mind when i was arguing with kaylin... still working on it... please leave comments and criticism.
Comments
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dont you hate when that happens? good to get it out in a poem , give it some air. Beautiful raw emotion. Thanks for sharing
~n
va
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i love it i understand what u mean. its jst like me and my ex shes like nw she jst wants to be friends bt i carn't be that close to her and not have her, know she dosn't love me when im so in love with her. love sucks
xx
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I LOVE this... i can totaly relate. I was in love with a girl that didnt feel the same way as i did, and it hurt so much. she lead me on and told me she luved me and i believed it... but now i know it was all a facade just to make me happy ( and all it did was make me sad) it was all false love in my eyes.
im sorry that this happened to you to ... if it even did happen like me or not... it sucks 4 anyone . this poem ment so much thank you for showing it. i luv the emotion in it keep writing
Kris -
Wow very nice job. It's so deep and strong too. Nice write.
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