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Five Minutes To Midnight

Its five minutes to midnight
And my heart is beating fast
I haven't slept in days
Cause all I can think about
Is you

There is light from the moon
Shining through my window
That is playing with the shadows
Making the walls dance

This silence is so pure
And nothing can break it
Just my slow breathing
And the beating in my chest

I toss and turn
Cause sleep is never here
Just the crazynes that you leave
And the way you make me smile

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  • couldbeworse
    March 6

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    Just the crazynes that you leave
    And the way you make me smile

    great write. someone must be very special for a piece like this.

  • phillyhottpockets
    January 16
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    this is pretty damn good when did you write this?


    • mickey94
      January 18
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      ummm the 14th? (bet you can't guess who its about)