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Curdled Milk

Cheese,
Please!

For mice and men
Beyond age ten,
Plus kings and queens,
And in betweens.

Oft full of holes
Just for the moles,
Or like a  brick
And in a stick.

Then, too, a wheel
Has got appeal.
And don't you hedge;
You'd like a wedge!

But as you live,
You should not give
It to a kitten,
For you'll be bitten!

Author notes

"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese."
-G.K. Chesterton
Seeing this quote on AP today, I just couldn't resist! :-)
As for the kitten, I offered one of mine a little piece of cheese from my fingers one day. I learned not to do that--kittens have very sharp teeth! She drew blood!

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  • Evinde
    May 23, 2009

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    Kitten's teeth and claws are indeed sharp, sharper than when they become adults!! I love this poem, it's very cute and the inspiration is wonderful


    • Jornada
      May 23, 2009
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      Thanks! This sounds like the voice of experience!


  • WithinYourEyes
    May 22, 2009

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    i love that. that is so cute. what a great idea for a poem!!!! and i love cheese, too. Thanks for putting a smile on my face!


  • Night Terrors
    May 22, 2009

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    great rhyme! thiught this was very entertianing! I think mice and Men was a very twisted little tale personally I loved it , but most people found it too disturbing. A great poem. Lots of diffrent random thoughts tied togther wonderfully!


    • Jornada
      May 23, 2009
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      Thanks! Sometimes I just get inspired, but I had to work a long time on this one, especially because of the rhyming. Don't know why, but I especially remember that I was working on it when I was leaving the dentist's office!


  • euphoric-frenzy
    May 22, 2009
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    This is adorable and it makes me hungry for some cheese. YAY!


    • Jornada
      May 23, 2009
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      Shouldn't have read your comment--now I'm hungry for some cheese! (But hey--I have some in the fridge!)


  • memoriesofyesterday
    May 14, 2009
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    Great rhyming! It has a really good rhythm and it made me laugh!


  • simplefarmgirl
    January 14, 2009
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    hahaha...you and your cheese... :-P

    loved it! Awesome rhyming!

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