What is love but a lie,
I get hurt and wanna die.
Youve torn my heart from my chest,
ripped it too pieces like all the rest.
What is love but a lie,
Im getting hurt and needs to die.
Ill add your name to my list,
its cause of you ive slit my wrists.
So what is love but a lie,
I am hurt and about to die.
I put a gun to my head,
pull the trigger now im dead.
A contest entry
- Anything by Stormy Days.
1750 points, ended February 1, 86 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What you think?
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i no how u feel...ive felt this way to...
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im sorry for the pain u have felt but iv been here as well so meny heartbreaking times
and i felt as if i was gona die as well
ur poem brings tears to my eyes in a pouring of pain
I hope ur heart heals soon
and also eep ur the great work -
awww its really sad
awwww are you ok? *hugs* i'm sorry for what happened i know how it feels
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Oh wow this is so good. It's really deep, and so emotional. I really loved it. You did an excellent job, keep on writing. Good luck in the contest.
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I love the rhyme in the poem. I think the way you repeated lines really made the poem a lot better gave it a more real like air
~GOOD LUCK~
*Dark Poet*
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