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The Perfect Blush

When she speaks to me, i'm gone
like a wolf without a home
Her eyes are brown, her face alight
I hope i can make it though the night
Her hands caress my feelings
In her gaze, my senses reeling
I've waited for her for this long
i know this is where i belong
I'm just a man, can't you see
Your eyes, how they unsettle me!
"Now, be patient," you say to me
Damn it, how can she be so silly
Then i see that perfect blush
her lips seal mine with a hush...

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  • jul
    March 28
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    Very nice! Thanks for entering the contest. Best wishes to you always

  • jul
    March 23
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    Good Job!! Hypnotic and sensually written. Very nice. Good luck to you. Thanks for entering

  • Zenda-Lokki gold member
    March 10
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    Beautiful poem. I too love the ending, is a wonderful way to finish a lovely write.

    Del

  • Fayfreire
    January 15

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    Beautifully written
    I love the end:

    Then i see that perfect blush
    her lips seal mine with a hush...

    Cheers,
    Fay