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Lost Shore

Missing image

 

The sands of time wash

 

away with the lunar tide,

 

returning to sea.

 

 

 

 

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  • Sunshine Always
    January 16

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    Beautiful Cyn,as always your writes capture with such strength...Peace and love ...mal

  • bowmore bill
    January 15
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    perplexed

    Hi Poet Muse, could you explain it.
    For me it is just too deep.Lol.

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      January 16
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      Thank you for the kudos!

      Hi Bill! It's really simple, the sands of time wash away into the sea... part of life, I guess. In fact I think I'll go ahead and edit that part of the poem... Thank you for pointing that error out to me... and thanks again for dropping in, your visits are always much appreciated!! Peace & hugs, xx Cyn xx


  • BonnieQ silver member
    January 15

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    Great Visual

    I definitely can see the ocean rushing to shore then retreating back out to sea; and, with that, I can hear its roar of defeat that it cannot cross the boundary God set for it. Well Done, Cynthia!

    Luv & hugs, BonnieQ


  • doolie gold member
    January 14
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    Just beautiful.


  • Maxboy gold member
    January 14

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    Very nice Cyn, beautiful.


  • SoulWhispher
    January 14
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    This is well done, a great Haiku, blessing with peace and love John


  • Olivias Violin
    January 14

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    Very good.

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