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Back to the Sea

Missing image

 

 

The seams of my soul

 

flow in river swirling

 

against time and death.

 

 

 

 

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  • bowmore bill
    January 15

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    Still perplexed.

    Hi cyn, i'm sure to a great many this has great meaning, espesially yourself.
    As you know i am a great admirer of you're work
    but with haiku, i can make neither head nor tail of it.


  • Desire gold member
    January 14

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    Wow~

    Oh My~ this so grabs and tugs at the Heartstrings Like Your other verses in form- this swells the eyes~
    Beautifully penned Precious One!!
    Adore the words: seams of my soul

    Keep that quill dancing~ Yay!!!!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • arafura gold member
    January 14
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    Lovely!