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Signs of Life

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Spirited horses

 

of the wild west roam freely

 

on painted billboards.

 

 

 

 

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Inspired during my trip through the mid-west on my way home to visit family.

 

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  • grannyeri gold member
    November 8

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    I like this image you have shared with us in these three lines; easy to read and understand. Nice ending in line three- unexpected, but makes sense.


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      November 8
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      Thank you...

      I appreciate your stopping in to check out my "signs" of life!! It's been a long while since I've seen you around... and I'll have to make it over your way to check out your pages as soon as I'm able!! Thanks again, and take care...
      Peace,
      Cyn

  • This is good.


  • VelvetWings
    February 28

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    A lovely write. I wasn't expecting the 'painted billboards' part but we have to get our inspiration from somewhere, hehe~
    It's amazing what kinds of things can inspire a piece such as this. Thanks for being inspired and sharing your creation with us!
    ~Sparrow


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 23

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    wonderful write

    have just come from a Reiki Share, the moment is beautifully expressed in line three, the whole works perfectly
    oh that still roamed the range again free,
    Spirit


  • Denerica
    January 19
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    I look forward for billboards that speak out...well done. Blessings.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    January 17

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    This is interesting.
    Nice AHA moment in line 3.


  • Everwind Rising
    January 17

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    That was great. I was totally caught up in the freedom of it and the era of the old west when suddenly I was transformed into a completely different time, place, and situation with that last line. This is perfectly done!


  • stavykm gold member
    January 16

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    Funny, for I know what you mean about those billboards. What a fabulous and fun write to take the reader. What a journey I felt I just went on. You are fabulos. Thank you for sharing your talent with me. I love horses too....

    Blessings
    Much Love Always,
    Kelle Marie

  • cute haiku


  • geckogirl silver member
    January 15

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    Great Haiku Cyn girl... Spirited horses love em...stay safe...
    Suz


  • Desire gold member
    January 14

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    OMG~

    Wowzers what an image and Oy~
    what image You painted with Your verse
    I love the words: painted billboards
    You took us there with You Beautiful
    Excellent~ You make this look
    so darn easy~ Haikus kick my tail
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Maxboy gold member
    January 14

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    Beautiful poem, but sad that you have to see them on billboards, instead of live.



  • Puppydog gold member
    January 14

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    SOFT AND LOVELY!!!!

    I always love to see animals in signs as I ride along anywhere. I even look at passing farms with their many animals in fields.

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      January 14
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      Thank you for the kudos!

      I'll be over your way asap, I'm just getting back home, and am using someone else's computer today. Thanks again for stopping by, you made my day!! See ya soon... -Cyn

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