Spirited horses
of the wild west roam freely
on painted billboards.
Author notes
Inspired during my trip through the mid-west on my way home to visit family.
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I like this image you have shared with us in these three lines; easy to read and understand. Nice ending in line three- unexpected, but makes sense.
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Thank you...
I appreciate your stopping in to check out my "signs" of life!!
It's been a long while since I've seen you around... and I'll have to make it over your way to check out your pages as soon as I'm able!! Thanks again, and take care...
Peace,
Cyn
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This is good.
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Thank you...
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A lovely write. I wasn't expecting the 'painted billboards' part but we have to get our inspiration from somewhere, hehe~
It's amazing what kinds of things can inspire a piece such as this. Thanks for being inspired and sharing your creation with us!
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wonderful write
have just come from a Reiki Share, the moment is beautifully expressed in line three, the whole works perfectly
oh that still roamed the range again free,
Spirit
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I look forward for billboards that speak out...well done. Blessings.
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This is interesting.
Nice AHA moment in line 3.
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That was great. I was totally caught up in the freedom of it and the era of the old west when suddenly I was transformed into a completely different time, place, and situation with that last line. This is perfectly done!
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Funny, for I know what you mean about those billboards. What a fabulous and fun write to take the reader. What a journey I felt I just went on. You are fabulos. Thank you for sharing your talent with me. I love horses too....
Blessings
Much Love Always,
Kelle Marie
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cute haiku
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Great Haiku Cyn girl... Spirited horses love em...stay safe...
Suz
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OMG~
Wowzers what an image and Oy~
what image You painted with Your verse
I love the words: painted billboards
You took us there with You Beautiful
Excellent~
You make this look
so darn easy~ Haikus kick my tail
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Beautiful poem, but sad that you have to see them on billboards, instead of live.
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SOFT AND LOVELY!!!!
I always love to see animals in signs as I ride along anywhere. I even look at passing farms with their many animals in fields.
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Thank you for the kudos!
I'll be over your way asap, I'm just getting back home, and am using someone else's computer today. Thanks again for stopping by, you made my day!! See ya soon... -Cyn
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