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What to do? What to say?

My fear is simple
My fear to let go.
I love you still
But I'm afraid it's not enough.

What to do?
What to say?
I though I was going to end my life with you.

What to do?
What to say?
All the things I want to.

I hope you know that I'll always love you
I hope you understand
I'm not sure I'm the one.

I don't want to let go
I don't want to hold on.
What do you think I should do?
I hate you too much to say with you
I love you too much to let go of you.

I know this isn't fair to you!

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  • Thebrokenhearted
    January 14

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    GREAT

    I know how you feel with this write its well put together. The only thing that can cure a broken heart time so just give it sometime let go of love and it will all get better