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The Last Dawn

The end follows the beginning,
Or so it's always said,
The a for abracadabra,
Makes way for the lonely zed,
The magic of the breaking dawn,
Fades in the blackest night,
'til all but your worst nightmare,
Is hidden from your sight,
But then the line up makes a change,
The order is reversed,
The end makes for a new beginning,
A light to the universe,
For God will emerge, at the end,
As he did before time began,
And people will not fear, but sing,
The song the angels sang!

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  • wandyway
    March 27

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    I likes, lots.
    I likes lots and lots and lots.
    It's pretty beautiful, actually ;D
    APPLAUSE FOR THEE.


  • Chemicals
    March 6

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    Worst of Nightmares

    I liked, I loved the poem....

    Just remember though, not all poems have to rhyme, you can always create a unique rhythm and flow without rhyme! ^.^

    BUT I DID LIKE IT! IT WAS...
    How do you say,
    A GOOD WRITE
    Keep up the good work :]


  • wynd-fyre
    March 6
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    Good!. Well rhymed, nice flow! I like the meaning! good job!