Your dream vacation, smile hostage refuge;
I watch you spin from afar.
Time Kills, Go ask Jesus,
So deep, that it didn't even bleed and catch me -
Always too hot, never too cold,
Be swift make noise -
I had no choice but to hear you
Harder faster, forever after,
(It was the night Rod Stewart played.)
I don't feel as if I know you,
You look like you rented a smile,
the guy who put his hands on you;
I don't want to be part of the problem.
I got a notion to say what doesn't feel right -
Being faced with what I'm faced with I feel
You try to play cool
For hearing all my doubts so selectively, and
I'm full of regret.
Oh no I just keep on falling,
I'm coming up so you better get this party started.
Author notes
1. Pretty Handsom Awkward - The Used
2. Moon - Sia
3. The Ripper - The Used
4. All That I've Got - The Used
5. Too Hot - Alanis Morissette
6. Four Left Feet - The Ditty Bops
7. Head Over Feet - Alanis Morissette
8. Bionic - Placebo
9. Rain - Alanis Morissette
10. Hello - Oasis
11. Return To Energizer - EnterShikari
12. Wounded - Thrid Eye Blind
13. So Jealous - Tegan and Sara
14. Notion - Kings of Leon
15. Pieces Mended - The Used
16. The Greatest ManThat Ever Lived - Weezer
17. Sorry To Myself - Alanis Morissette
18. Tangled - Maroon 5
19. Born For This - Paramore
20. Get This Party Started - Pink
21. If I Never See Your Face Again - Maroon 5
the Chase 
A contest entry
- A Little Bit o Fun by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
550 points, ended January 23, 2009, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any ideas to help me better this?
Comments
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lol...this seems like a fun contest to write for, though I don't think any of these poems will make the best sellers list.
Good luck in this contest.
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Yep certainly an interesting read Some good tunes there, didn't make a whole lot of sense but then thats the point. Thanks for entering and good luck
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Dry with and a Wry smile :P
Being faced with what I'm faced with I feel
Should it be with "What I feel?"
Your wry sarcasm filled with wit, is bringing this smile to my face -_-. I'll get you back for that one.
I have one question though, you ended your poem with this line :"I'm coming up so you better get this party started"
Why?
It doesn't seem to fit the poem
De Arterian
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Funny how so many of the lines can kind of work together.
Thank you for listing the songs and artist in your Author Notes makes it more interesting to see how many you can get correct. Good luck in the contest.
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I have to say that your music selection made for a very interesting poem. Glad you took part in this and hope you had fun.
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Haha, yeah, a couple hundred songs in my library and my computer spits out that. LOL. I had fun though.
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