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This Heart

It is neither made of stone or glass.
This heart is made with love and kindess.
Handle it as you could your own.

Respect if you please
what makes a heart unique.
Neither stone nor glass feels.
But a heart filled with truth
nurtured in goodness
is worth more imagined.

Cherish a find if you will.
Once bruised,
twice used
makes this
heart beat
as thunder
after a storm followed by a rainbow
where a treasure is waiting for you.

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  • TragicFlaw
    March 12, 2009
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    My favorite part, though i hate to say it, was:
    "Cherish a find if you will,
    Once bruised,
    twice used"

    It just flowed so well and ir eally liked how everything was so simply put yet so deep you could swim through your words forever.
    Keep writing, wonderful job,
    Tragic


  • SwaGGtastic
    February 6, 2009

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    I like this one also... I have those feelings.. But only once... Long time ago.. I just don't catch feelings no more HaHa (Nice Words)


  • Imortal Angel
    January 23, 2009
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    that is an amazing write. ur an awsome poet


  • theredcatjazzoflove
    January 19, 2009

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    nice the way you described a shattered heart very creative in thoughts this was a pleasure to read _tha baddest_