Love wrapped in plastic clear but cold
Forgotten with the passing night
Head bent in sorrow to hide the tears
Put away in darkness with no light
Passion faded with now empty arms
As he passes slowly from her view
Love wrapped in plastic clear yet cold
Sad memories now left of you
Author notes
'esc' by rosie hardy
A contest entry
- Picture prompt. by morgana raven.
400 points, ended January 16, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I don't know for absolute what the metaphor of 'Love wrapped in plastic clear yet cold' means but what I see while reading this is what I often find myself doing...
Going through old photo albums and being caught up in the bittersweet memories behind and within the cold plastic of the pictures and albums.
Your poetic genuis is as always evident and beautiful.
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Beautiful John. This one touches this reader's heart. You do have a magically way of bringing your emotions to life in your lovely words of rhyme. What a pleasure to read. Take care,
Blessings and Love to you,
Sandy
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Love wrapped in plastic clear yet cold
i really loved this line. I thought the 'clear yet cold' was great. Thanks for entering.
Laura
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