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Painful Tears

A tear drop
isn't worth pain
caused by it

A smile will
say it all;
shows no sadness

Underneath it all
there is still
an unhealed scar

Every tear shed
is another reminder
of the pain

Does he care?
Does he lie?
The answer unknown

Nothing is ever
going to be
how it was

Goodbye to the
pretty light, hello
to the darkness

A contest entry

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  • tears.of.silence gold member
    February 9, 2009

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    very nice

    thank you for sharing something so emotional you really did a great job.. i can understand how it goes.. does he really care? does he really mean what he says? how can you be sure? was everything he said a lie? great work and thanks for entering the contest. good luck to you.


  • redhanded
    February 6, 2009

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    very nice write you have here, loved the ending lines. thanks so much for your entry and best of luck to you in this contest and in the future
    andi
    (redhanded)


  • Blind Sight
    February 6, 2009
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    It's a lovely poem. Very strong. Thanks for entering.


  • August Starlight gold member
    February 3, 2009
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    So sad but true.
    My favorite part is the last stanza.
    Good write and thanks for entering.


  • FallenFromGrace1102
    January 29, 2009

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    This was differnt I liked it. It was a unique write. Keep up the awesome work. I wish you the best of luck in my contest and thank you for entering this piece.

    *~*bee*~*


  • Ryan79
    January 14, 2009

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    Beautiful and sad. Don't let it get you down. You are great. Sorry that you were hurt by him. You will heal in time. Don't give up.

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