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Faery-Tails Aren't Real-Kristina Davis(Song)

(Verse 1)

Nothin's going right,
nobody's here tonight.
Who's gonna save you now?
Maybe you'll just skip town.
Walk away,and I won't stay.

(Course)

You've given up,
noone to love.
You ask yourself a millon times,
Why it won't end right.
Faery~tails aren't real,
Everything you feel.
You can't seem to see,
That you could reach for me

(Verse 2)

Your life is complicated,
Your senses have been jaded.
Would anyone care if if you died,
When noone came when you cried?
But did you ever see me?
I've been here long enough,
Hoping for your love.

(Course)

You've given up,
Noone to love.
You ask yourself,
the millonth time.
Why it won't end right.
Faery~tails aren't real,
Everything you feel.
You've never seemed to see.
That you could reach for me.

(Bridge)

Love is dieing,
You lay there crying.
Can you see me now,
As the sun is blocked by clouds?

(Course)

You've given up,noone to love.
You ask yourself a millon times,
Why it won't end right.
Faery~tails aren't real,
Everything you feel.
You can't seem to see,
That you could reach for me

(Course,Reprise)

Now I'm given up,
One sided love.
I've asked myself a millon times,
Because it won't end right.
Faery~tails aren't real,
It's true for what I feel.
And now I wish you'd see,
That you should reach for me.

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  • Daire
    January 18
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    This is a good little song. One thing I'll say though is that 'course' should be 'chorus'.


  • trekkergirl
    January 17

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    This is a wonderfully written song. I usually don't read songs much but yours are always so interesting thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for placing it in our reading list on our friends group.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 16

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    What a lovely song you have written here!
    I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for posting
    it here and keep it up!




    Jeremy0826


  • MysticalRayne
    January 15

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    Thank you for sharing - this is a different approach and I think you did a great job on it - I can see you singing this


  • toomysterious
    January 14
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    This seems very7 well thought out and put together.


  • UntilxIxDie
    January 14
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    thats cool

    do u sing it


  • Captain Amber SL
    January 14

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    *claps wildly*
    This is a really good song. It has a lot of emotions in it, and I can really imagine it being set to music. I love the line "Your senses have been jaded", it seems so imaginative.
    Well done, Tifa. This is good, and if it's been set to music, or you plan to anytime soon, I'd love to hear it.


    • Mie Silvermoon
      January 14
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      ~bows~Thank you thank you.

      It was a collaboration,a friend of mine helped me with some of it.I haven't had the chance to set it to music yet,but I will soon.Promise!

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