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Alive and Untouched

Trapped Inside a darkness

Unable to breather or feel

Awaiting the unlikely rescue

To draw me from the depths

I can't sense emotion

No thoughts wonder through my mind

Numbness expands

It grows colder and darker

As I sink deeper inside

When suddenly everything's different

much more golden than the black

I feel the numbness releasing

deep darkness turning to light

Its bright glow blinds my eyes

but my thoughts return crystal clear

I feel the coldness degrading

Turning steadily to warmth

I open my mouth and breathe in deep

letting the cold air pass through my lungs

As all emotions flood back

I realize where I am

finally free of this wretched darkness

and embracing the new found light

I am completely aware

able to think clearly at last

Alive and untouched by the darkness.

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  • toxic-love
    January 15

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    wow!!

    wow, this is amazing...i feel like it was written with great depth and i really loved it... keep up this great writting xxx


  • hisaddiction
    January 14
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    this is well thought