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...trickles...

stand beneath your
memories
        [drip drip drip]

drips will fill your
streams
        [the past washes over you]

your streams will fill your
rivers
  [as you bathe in the familiar]

your rivers will fill your
oceans
  [with each drip  drip    drip]

and you'll

Swim.

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  • Angierie
    January 14
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    Very unique.. i like this a lot.
    Great write