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Serenade

Tonight's a beautiful night for a song,
but there's nobody here, to sing it to
So I must find your window tonight
maybe...just maybe...I'll sing to you

For the moon's full, and I've been waiting
maybe I'll sing here, to your heart's delight
Maybe then, I'll capture your heart and soul
So I'll pick up my guitar, and sing to you all night

A song in the night, to your delight
Words that must fall upon your ears
Words that have to win your heart
for there's no way here, I'll disappear

So it begins, maybe a ballard of reknown
one written, that's been written for you
My back-ups are waiting to sing in unison
for this is something, that I've got to do

A song in the night, meant for your ears
the beat's coming from the tears falling
Under your window, tonight you'll know
that a song of love, it's definately calling

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  • poet2angels gold member
    January 16

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    This is so romantic like a true serenade. I love it...

    Lynda


  • DogFish silver member
    January 15
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    You are either hopelessly romantic,
    hopelessly in love
    or hopelessly both!!


  • poeticwaste
    January 15
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    Nice.

    Can hear the song already.


  • TJ Becker
    January 14

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    Great

    Flow and rhyme was really good. Romantic and touching. The last stanza was really the clincher that put it together. Great job.