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Errant Wings

He came,
As if,
On Errant Wing...

Restoring all my hopes,
My dreams.

With pure love,
He purged my pain,

And taught me,
How to love again.

He came as if on Errant Wing...
This angle,
In a young girls dream.

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  • Three Doves
    January 28
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    A wonderful write!
    In God's Love
    Noah


  • Xianaria gold member
    January 24
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    Thank you ~
    Almost lyric-like, I enjoyed the sentiment within these words.