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Daddy

You had a place in my heart,
I miss you so very much.
Not often I knew your touch,
I had loved you from the start.

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  • Diablosanjil gold member
    August 21

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    Very short but very strong ... I envy all who knew their fathers. and then yet i dont because my mother was my fullfillment. she taught me everything i needed to know in my life... But sorry for the ramble.. anywho very good poem.. Thanks for sharing this. I look forward t reading more from you.

  • abu nuwas
    June 7
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    Sad

    I always hope these things are just poetic fictions. It sounds terribly sad.


  • second-born
    January 16
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    this is so sad...but I felt your emotions here...very sincere...thank you for sharing your poem!