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Heavenly Angels

Angels sent down from above,
to give a baby their love.
They had loved her from the start,
they found their place in her heart.

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  • Vera Rich gold member
    August 20

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    Thia would go well on a birth-congratulations or Christening card. Neat, simple and sincere!

    "Above"/"love" is perhaps a rather "obvious" rhyme, but in this context works well enough.


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    March 19
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    Lovely and short but with a deep meaning


  • log-home-guy-Nic
    March 6
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    wonderful

    short sweet and to the piont. thanks for posting this. let me see some more when you have them Nic.


  • Nicsnowdemon silver member
    March 5
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    you should put this on the cristian poetry group
    it would go good


  • second-born
    January 16

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    this is so great...parents are truly loving when it comes to their babies...thank you for sharing this piece!

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