good morning lover
i can see that you have slept well
your eyes not puffy and red
so you can see how beautiful you are
your breath is still sweet
so let the kisses tickle my face
your voice is just as soft as your sleep
now spoil me with your lyrics
good morning lover
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i want to say this to every one i have sept next to.
but i have never spoke it.
are you awake yet?
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I feel ya, there's that great moment in the morning when you just don't have any motives. I feel like this expresses the purity of that moment.
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We do, I think becasue, not only is it wrote well. but we all hear the soft beauty in your words for that wonderful moment when you wake up with someone you love. good job, loved it.
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Wow. Stunning.
I feel like
copying this down
And letting a lover know
the next time we wake up
next to each other.
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thank you so much.
every one likes this one for some reason. lol -
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Probably because of
how innocent it is
and how open to
individual interpretation.
It's something almost everyone
can relate to.
Anyone who's
slept next to someone,
be it a lover or a friend,
knows the feeling
of waking up
next to someone
they care about.
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this is very beautiful and sweet...enjoying those first moments upon waking..maybe you should think about actually saying this..see where it leads!!LOL!!
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aww clair i like it, you never slept with me, but you prolly heard me snore.. =-\
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Ha that's so cute
and so true
that would be a dream tos ay that next to a lover when you wkae up next to them..
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I loved it ^^
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cute
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Well perhaps it's a good thing I didn't sleep next to you because that would be a bit weird to hear from you I think
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aww this is sweet u should say it to those ppl...i feel this every time i wake up next to my bf
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Very sweet
A very sweet sentiment you have here. It is very warm and comforting, I could only imagine how you experience it, but it seems very fufilling. Maybe one day you will say it.
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so touching.
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