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Kiss of Goodnight

"kahin door jab din dhal jaye"...
with a kiss of goodnight
dusk dances in the arms of falling night
as crimson ball of fire gently bows down
for the evening skies
another day is captured in the memory box of time
closing another chapter of the past
for a new beginning awaiting with a smile

Author notes

"kahin door jab din dhal jaye"... (This line is in Hindi - meaning - Far away when day simmers down)

Photograph provided by my big brother's friend - Harjeet Kakkar

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  • Lady Altheia
    January 19

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    "another day is captured in the memory box of time" I really love that line. I have a memory book but mine is in my head.


  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    January 18

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    WOW mom! The photo is almost as breath taking as ur poem. I love the sweet serenity the 2 make ^_^



    Love ya!

    ~Lorissa~


  • StarEyes
    January 14

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    Minoo,

    This is fantastic! One gets the feel that they are there, and can feel that warm breeze 'kissing them goodnight' Great job on this one! and that picture... OMG! I love it!

    and love

    Nyetta