Passion between bodies joined in lover's passion
Undressing shame's facade revealed undressing
Ashen white flesh burning flame to smoky ashen
Caressing soft velvet touch of two caressing
One united from two as two meld into one
Arousal rises inside of opened arousal
Spun together interwoven nude bodies spun
Spousal commitment given to each in spousal
Soul known intimately inside another soul
Tears of orgasmic rage mingled with joyful tears
Whole being bound freeing and filling empty hole
Fears cast away facing as one each others fears
Love freely unconditionally given to love
Above below within beside God joins from above
Author notes
Written in pseudo Shadow Sonnet Form invented by the incredibly beautiful and talented Amera M. Andersen. The syllable count is 12 instead of 10 or 11 and the final stanza has 13 syllables per line.
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A contest entry
- Love...what is it? by azlyn.
599 points, ended January 20, 2009, 17 entries
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Comments
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excellent~
Another shadow sonnet penned beautifully
Enjoyed the read.......
Hugs n love
Susan~~~
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How lovely! Very nice verse in form and content! Thank you for your entry.
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