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He Said To Me ~(Meditative Ballad)~



he said to me
it's not to be

stolen moments, swiftly to swell
ardent saffron, warm weather's flight
he sank us deep into the night
released in citrus blossom bell

ardent saffron, warm weather's flight
cast his web, so locked in love's spell
commanded spear, my heart not dwell
he sank us deep into the night

he said to me
ardent saffron, warm weather's flight
our time is nigh, sent me to hell
he sank us deep into the night
it's not to be

it's not to be
he said to me

Author notes

Meditative Ballad- form by Amaranthine Lover
see form details in this column:
http://allpoetry.com/column/show/2340170

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  • piccola silver member
    January 18

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    I like the use of the word saffron here. I like this particular form too. Well done and thank you for entering the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 14

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    aw wow this wonderful I love the emotions and the flow good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 14

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    wow, gorgeous! you nailed it right on the head! I held a contest before and no one was able to get it right, but you got it perfectly! you write them even better then I do! wow!


    • Hetha gold member
      January 14
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      Thank you, but I rather thought "She Ran So Far Away" written by you, was beyond compare.

      I loved it! The form was fun to do, I may do some more soon.