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A hard Decision

So you say alright
and jump quickly from the ledge
Swing Swing Swing Snap  Dead

Author notes

I'm feeling morbid at the moment, so please xcuse me. But I like the haiku. It's short and to the point.

1. Take your life in your own hands and what happens? A terrible thing: no one to blame.
Erica Jong

A contest entry

a little too harsh?

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  • Cannonsfire gold member
    January 14

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    Well if it's the way you feel then it's the way it should be written..the font is a little dark to read perhaps, that's my only crit C