From a afar, I caught a glimpse of an intriguing beauty. She was not one of those sluttish looking girls that you see in magazines, or the women that try to copy them. This beauty was a women, she had an air about that spelled out, I am your every fantasy. And that is when I saw her, not really saw her but she was in my mind playing a part in a little fantasy.
It was a cold winter day and I was lost in the woods, there I was freezing wandering around the woods.
The hour was getting later, I could tell by the setting sun, with the winter days being so much shorter, I knew that I would never find my way out of the woods and I was surely going to freeze to death. Slumping on a tree I must have falling asleep or either I have died.
Because I am awaking by what must surely be an Angel, she is wearing only a long white gown. She does not say anything, she just smiles and beckons me to follow her with a soft seductive smile. My angel has come to lead me to heaven, watching the sway of her hips, awakens fantasies of the promising warmth and paradise between her legs. My thoughts turn carnal and I know that surely they are going to send me to hell for thinking sexual thoughts about my angel.
Coming out of my trance, I look up and see the angel of my dream smiling at me. That is when I see her pearly white fangs and the wicked flash in her eyes. She beckons me and I am powerless to do more then follow her. I just hope that I get a small taste of heaven before my angel sucks the last drop of my lives blood from my body.
A contest entry
- PICTURE INSPIRED POEMS by ennovy.
750 points, ended January 26, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Nice play on the expected and good use of symbols. The sexual undertones gave it a light humorous touch. Enjoyed the read and you held my attention from beginning to end.
Love,
Tom B.
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my goodness this is..
HOT! Who think right out the gate i'd find such an amazingly tantalizing story, i loved the imagery you employed here it felt 'otherworldly' yet realistic at the same time..and yeah i feel you, if you gotta go anyway may as well hope for ultimate pleasure right on your way out!!
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amazing
congrats on the gold you deserved it...very good write...love the twist at the end... -
woah that was an intense write, very good and very deep, thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work, this was nothing like i expected it to be when i started to read , a well deserved gold for this write
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A spellbinding story, well done. My last date turned out just like that, lol.
Thanks for entering our contest, and good luck.
Novy & Brazos
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Great take on the picture prompt, A tale of lust for a vampire. Enjoyed the read and the best of luck to you in this contest.
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Brilliant Short Story
This makes a very dark tale take on the light of purity....a vampire in white...appearing angelic....you imagery is at work here on this picture...and I enjoyed the tale....excellent writing my poetic friend..............brazos & novy
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so good
Amazing story. I loved the way it moved from admiration to terror. Very good. I think you made a short piece into a very interesting saga
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