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not exactly personal..

i am digging a well,
to catch your tear drops.
and because they remain,
on the edge of your jawline,
i have no power to make them fall.
it is only you who could give up your sadness.
realize that the day you die,
i die.

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  • dreamsindigital
    March 4

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    this is a powerful little poem, i really think sometimes in poetry less says more and here it definately does. beautiful work


  • butterflyink
    February 20
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    wow, I cannot thank you enough for that comment, it is so greatly appreciated.