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A Sigh

No time for needs

or emotional tie

when ambition's are high


when day is done

i am but a sigh

that bleeds

from the deeds

of getting by

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  • Daire
    January 23

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    Life can, at times, seem like going through the motions. You demonstrate this well with the simple motif of a sigh.


  • Olivias Violin
    January 14
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    good poem